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Question: What do you think of this poem!.!?
When I was a baby
I drove my mama crazy
but!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.over time I learned not to whine
Even though I was blind
My mama knew one day I would shine
Now that I'm on stage I speak about my life, my age, my rage
This artform for me is not a faze
I will share my talent in many ways
And Someday when I'm grown
I will claim my thrown
And Now a days
My mama say
don't be like them
Even If the day is dark and dim
Stay true to you
And Do what you do
And don't be afraid
Be Brave
Cause this Earth this life
Is not an allusion
Is just an everlasting

People don't call my work poetry!. And I don't think it is either!.
For the best anwser define my workWww@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
mm!.!.!.were u visualizing this as a rap!? either way, i enjoyd it very much i esp!. liked the "now that i'm on stage!.!.!." - very original and really good
the only word i can find to describe your poem is cool, its not beautiful because that feels too gay of a word, its just a cool poem
so great job :)Www@QuestionHome@Com

It seems like a rap, check your grammar a little better, other then that it was good, but not like a poem more like a rapWww@QuestionHome@Com