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What do you think of my entry in the "Drink beer and drive to the game with the radio on" poetry challenge!?
Onto the chaparral
under a lone star,
a flock of seagulls,
raiders with intrigue,
paint red stripes
in the clash!.
Olympia and Mercury,
rainy oilers on
men at work,
a cavalier grand safari,
(Do I get double points for 'Cavalier'; both a car and a ballplayer!?)Www@QuestionHome@Com
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Didn't you say "in each line"!?Www@QuestionHome@Com
Don't you also get double for 'lone star' and 'raiders!?'
It's not fair! You took a couple of hours to come up with this great poem!. The rest of us did it in minutes!.
Tapping on the keyboard,
Longing to fly like eagles,
Flapping, failing wings,
cries at vespers
Fearing I may never reach
this is what I get for working on a weekend!.!.I never know whatinhell is happening(sigh)Www@QuestionHome@Com
I think you've got the win hands down!.
A Cavalier is also a breed of dog, you know, that should count for extra points too!Www@QuestionHome@Com
After being stupidly convicted of a DUI, I think your challenge title is most unwise!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
You get two points taken away for typing "ballplayer" when it's a NBA team, but I think you still have a large enough margin for a win!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
You win!. Haha - I do believe you get double points a few times in that one!.
EDIT: Then according to Diane's statement I think we should be graded on a curve!. :-)Www@QuestionHome@Com
Hmmm, I think you've got it!. You pulled out some not so well known named!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
me thinks triple points for all that you have squeezed into this one!Www@QuestionHome@Com