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Comments on a poem about the love of a poet's words!?
The throng gathers and
waits, eager to listen
as at the shrine
for Apollo at Delphi!.
An allegory will come
from the lips of this god,
the crowd observes
knit cap of green
emerging from behind
speak to us,
Oracle of Truth,
your words we clamber
Make wrongs right,
where only death
Awaken those lost in
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
The vapors of Delphi
and a carnivores intent
at a seemingly dirty old man
ranting verse of darkness
that unseemly side of existence
that we avoid on our way to work
How is this moldy knit
grown into my skin
with its humor Black!?
Have I been infected
with its decay!?
Rancid Pot pies
on unkempt pubic hair
and sausage dipped in cheap vodka
unbathed by the heights of mankind
can be found in the vulgar
ink of an artist!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Awe ma !.!.!. you are so sweet! Buk is my Oracle of truth most days as well!.
Uh, I'm not sure if that's as scary as it sounds or not! lol
Noooo !.!.!. I adore him, his knit green cap, and his amazing words never cease to lift my spirits or make me laugh when I'm down!.
Well said sweet lady !.!.!. well said!
I think that you have brilliantly harnessed the effect of poetic words on the masses!. We are accused of waking those lost in deep slumber!. Your words have often shaken me awake!. This is one included!.
Edit: Slumber is officially at your disposal Ma!Www@QuestionHome@Com
Location!.!.!.location!.!.!.location! Nymphs appear at Delphi, not some old wizened character in a knit cap! Now a bar in Dublin, much better setting! Have you ever visited the O'Tooles Delphi in downtown Dublin!? Lots of knit caps there! lolWww@QuestionHome@Com
Is this mortal god you are referring Obama!? If so we are all hungering for a change and something refreshing to hear!. Thanks Ma good poem!.!. as this is what i got from your poem!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
this one will have him stand proud with new words to say the next time he comes alive again!.
kitty is laughter!. got to love her!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Beutiful, Ma!. This is awesome!Www@QuestionHome@Com
I saw him blush, too Ma, and a glint of a tear in the corner of his eye!. Well done!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
I like it, very nicely done, simple and straightforwardWww@QuestionHome@Com
With respect to all other great poets in this space-One of the best poems I have read here!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
I think I saw Buk blush!!! Wonderful poem!. Is indeed one of your very best!. Congrats!!Www@QuestionHome@Com
Well if that don't cheer him up !. !. !.Www@QuestionHome@Com
I am among the throng!
Good one this--fun to read!Www@QuestionHome@Com
this is beautiful
My first search when I get on here is for his words (then yours, of course)!
This is wonderful!. Great write!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Made me smile!.
By the way, clamor, not clamberWww@QuestionHome@Com
Oh, My, God! So coool! but God needs ot be CAPITAL!:-)Www@QuestionHome@Com
well !.!.that shot to hell !.!.the statement of not posting anymore poems !.!.!.seamanabWww@QuestionHome@Com
"Awaken those lost in
!.!.!.my prayer for myself!.!.!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
The reason your mortal god keeps getting suspended is that he is of the backwards variety and hence prefers drinking from the toilet!.!.!. the toilet you all fill!Www@QuestionHome@Com