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They want to put me in a square!
Well, I don’t think that’s very fair!
My edges seem to fray a bit!.!.!.
It simply puts me in a fit !

I thought I’d take a stand and share;
They want to put me in a square!
I tried to lace that corset up!.!.!.
My boobs exploded from the cups!

I ‘m not a square, as you can see,
I’m round and jolly as can be!.!.!.
They want to put me in a square!
I think they really should compare;

I stood my ground and said "no more!"
!.!.!.Their attitude is one great bore,
I can’t believe that they would dare!.!.!.
They want to put me in a square!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
I think most of the people missed the point of the corset as being tradition and like Beevis and Butthead !.!.!. went heeheehee, she said boobs !.!.!. but the metaphor was powerful and attention grabbing even in the most course of us, but here is my rebuttal question: In a world of rebels what can we rebel from!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

i loooove this poem, at first it sounds like just a funny happyish poem but it also sends out a strong message about how society treats larger womand by trying to force them to conform to what they think is beautiful which to them equals skinny - we need variety in our media because it really has become a bore :P
an excellent poem with a very important message
brilliant work :)Www@QuestionHome@Com

lmao at boobs exploded form cups,i really think they should put you in a square!.

are you alright because you don't seem to be your usual self,in mood for fun i guess!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

But being "square" is good; think Freemasonry!.

or as "they" would say, "you can't fit a square peg in a round hole!"

do you know who "they" are!?

I loved it; it's not disjointed at allWww@QuestionHome@Com

me do not see it disjointed, it flows pretty well!. needless to say, this style is your coup of tea, and it is very tasty!. me thinks there is a base of reality to this beautiful verse, ms!. musing!. t!.y!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Umm !. !. !. , NICE visual!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

did you just say!.!.!.!.!.

"!.!.!.!.!.!.boobs exploded!?!?!?"

good lord!.!.!.!.!.

!.!.!.!.that ain't a good sight if you ask me!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Humorous -- tried to picture it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I like it!. Reminds me somewhat of "The Missing Piece!."Www@QuestionHome@Com

When I was a locomotive, they put me in a roundhouse!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Funny ready, and form used well!Www@QuestionHome@Com

What did Swayze say in that movie!?
"No one puts Baby in the corner!."

Very fun read!Www@QuestionHome@Com

This is clever and funny!. Great work! You always do great work!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

REALLY NICE POEM!.!.!!!!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Fun!. I loved this!. I cannot be fitted into a shape!. I refuse to conform and I hate it when my boobs explode!Www@QuestionHome@Com