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Question: Would you give me some feedback on these Diamonte Poem structures!?
Common, small
Burrowing, climbing, eating
Fruit, sap, nests, homes
Poisoning, smashing, fighting
Irritated, determined

Pretty, happy
Smiling, laughing, flirting
Eyes, lips, hands, feet
Watching, waiting, hesitating
Strong, stubborn

Cloudy, blue
Changing, lighting, bathing
Trees, grass, creatures, secrets
Harbouring, washing, holding
Calm, immense

They are not as easy as they look and I am not sure if I got it right!.
each one stands alone, they are not a three verse session!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
i believe i got it so i believe u got it!.!.!.dude!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

I like these!. I invented an invention like this!. I call it the 'Geom', short for geometric poetry!. I started with a perfect square!. Charles Audette submitted one for TW 2008 book that was a poem drawn to look like a Colt !.45!.!.!.wow!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Morning Nancy!.

I see the first and last, the second is too plain compared to them!.
Love the connections!.
I read everything you write BTW!. I like all, I love most!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I really don't know anything about this form of poetry!.!.!. Sorry!.!.!. But from the examples I saw on the internet (did a bit of research)!.!.!. I think it is really good!.!.!. I like it!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Nice poem dude!.!.!!!Www@QuestionHome@Com

I like these a lot!. We had a diamante challenge some months ago and the POMs did some great ones!. I might try again!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

My favorite is Sky!. These are good!.Www@QuestionHome@Com