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Question: Please will you read my poem!?!? tell me what you think :)!?
please read it an tell me what you think!. i know it's bad so thanks for reading!. also, what do you think it's about!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

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omg thats really good!. Youre boyfriend is with anther girl but u misunderstood the wholr thing!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

i really enjoyed this poem, like othres have poined out - it has a bitter sweet taste to it
maybe adding "Now it's too late" after "I'm an idiot" becuase i feel like that line doesn't really finalize it - for me anyway

thts just an opinion, other than that i think this is a very lovely poem
keep writing :)Www@QuestionHome@Com

I like your poem! It's short and bittersweet! It reminds me of the misunderstanding told in great length in the entire version of "After the Ball," written by Charles K!. Harris, 1892 - a song of great popularity at that time!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I feel bad for laughing but that was too funny!. I reread it again just now and I like it! 8/10!

I have 2 up nw, also!. If you have the time, cold you comment them!? :] It would be greatly appreciated!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

i like the whole thing except the "idiot " part!.!Www@QuestionHome@Com

its weird its funny its sadWww@QuestionHome@Com