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May I write a poem about the poets of Yahoo and Mars!?
My skin is covered!.!.!.!.
There is not space for another word
!.!.!.!.!. Not a cove for a verb
Or area for ink!.!.!. my skin is covered
By your words!.!.!.
Words that have opened doors in my head!.!.!.
!.!.!.!.!. Removing the barnacles of ignorance hurled my way
Welding together the bonds of tolerance
Sailing the seas of tolerance in a boat rowed by artists!.!.!.
!.!.!. Teachers!.!.!. nurses!.!.!. doctors!.!.!.!. brothers!.!.!. sisters
Scribing their names on my heart!.!.!.!.
!.!.!.!.!. My skin is covered!.!. by the calligraphy of great people
Who with wisdom and grace have written away fears!.!.!.
Erased hatred!.!.!. and embraced strangers with arms far reaching
!.!.!.!. Yet willing and able to touch!.!.!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
So you, this verse, so humble and loving!.
You have no idea how you do the same for us, do you!?
Since you asked so politely and grammatically correct, then yes, you may write a poem about anything you desire! !.!.!.!.All kidding aside, you write extremely well and I was quite impressed with your poem!. You should look into being published!. I was expecting something really awful and silly, but was surprised by how well you write!Www@QuestionHome@Com
Very well said, Semper!. Despite minor setbacks (and I DO mean minor), there are some very wonderful people hovering here and on Mars!.!.!.Now if they'd land the darn thing we could get off the ship and start the party!
And I paused to pray for Jake, even though I don't know who he is!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
The Mars orbiter has been trying to land for days!. The new platform is tricky and webboys' child has been ill!. (This is the part where everybody stops and prays for Jake Valentine!.) Elaine and I have been arbet'n our tuccas off trying to touchdown!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
I left answers in pain and returned to this section where I have found love, acceptance, guidance, warmth!. You have all nestled yourselves within my heart!. My cup runneth over!.
You are a lovely, lovely, talented man!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
There are always new doors to open, new places to explore!.
Just when we think we have reached the shore, new lands appear!.
A beautiful write, my friend, GBU!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Fine metaphors to describe our mission!. Like love, the skin can always include more!. There can be no hatred when people like you write your beautiful and wise words!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Ah, very interesting!. Good stuff!.
Keep writing, it's a good talent of yours!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
That's awesome SF!. I feel the same and I hope to learn/gain even more !.!.!. also when I start really taking a look at Mars!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Excellent, wise and beautifully written!
You have spoken many truths here!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
This is absolutely, "Beautiful"! :DWww@QuestionHome@Com
"Sailing the seas of tolerance!.!.!.!.!.!.
!.!.!.!.!.!.in a boat rowed by artists!.!.!."
!.!.!.i love that line!!Www@QuestionHome@Com
i like the erarased hatred partWww@QuestionHome@Com
I love your message but it doesn`t stop all the thumbs down!.
"The Troll Hunter"Www@QuestionHome@Com
You certainly may! Nice pen!.!.!.visual and all!Www@QuestionHome@Com
aww thats cuteWww@QuestionHome@Com
hope that was worth your timeWww@QuestionHome@Com
i love it, i have to tell all my friends about it
*i am a rebel*Www@QuestionHome@Com