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Question: You like my love poem!?
you make me laugh
you make me cry
you leave me tired
yet wondering
how you become to be
the love of my life
i love you
deep from my heart
you, the flower of my life
when i think of you
i see nothing
but your brilliant smile
yet you left me
knowing your my lifeWww@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
You make me laugh,
You make me cry,
You leave me tired
And wondering why
You have come
To be my love!.!.!.

I love you,
Deep with in my heart,
Like a bountiful well,
That never runs dry!.
When I think of you,
I see nothing
But your dazzling smile,
And yet,
And yet!.!.!.

You left me
To stand alone,
Wondering what
Could have been!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Nicely written poem!.!.!.
Good attempt!.!.!!
But I think that u could have written it even in much more better prospective n idea!.!.!!!Www@QuestionHome@Com

This poem is pretty good!!!
It sorta explains me a little!!!
LOL :DWww@QuestionHome@Com

its okaii only same wordsWww@QuestionHome@Com

umm its okay~ kinda cliche and simple but its sweet =]Www@QuestionHome@Com