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Question: Opinions on my poem, please!? (Not the same one as before)!?
This is called, "Make Your Choice"

Life is like a puzzle
it needs to be put together
The pieces always change,
just like the weather!.
Life is like a tornado!.
It has a path to nowhere!.
It can leave destruction,
sadness and despair!.
Life is like a cloud!.
It drifts in it's own way!.
If it ever needs to,
it can run away!.
Life is like a clock!.
It's different every time!.
Life is like a poem!.
It always find a rhyme!.
Life is like a movie!.
Life is like a song!.
You can watch it happen,
and sing it all day long!.
Life is how you make it!.
Life is what's true!.
all of the choices
are always made by you!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Sweet, I think I need to start checking stuff out over here instead of in B&A!.!.!.people seem to be so much better at poetry than at writing full stories!.

Anyway, it's amazing!. Truly!. I don't always like a lot of poetry, but this is very true and fun to read!. Keep writing, I'm impressed!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

thats AMAZING!
its really really good
you should definately get this published
good luck
i loved it

answer myq uesiton please

Very good!.!.!.keep writing!. Like the subject!.!.!. it's tue!.Www@QuestionHome@Com