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Question: So !. !. !. , there I was, wondering: whatdya think of this!?
Look !. !. !. ,
The truth is there, under the rug
with the crumbs and the hair
of the dog!.
I don’t won’t to see it, so I swept it there
and there is where it’ll stay
until another encore of Spring
when I beat it out with a stick!.

But I’ll leave the windows open
all Summer; it’ll be back,
eventually, covering everything!.
And sometime next Fall,
before people stop in
I’ll put it back under there,
then spend the Winter dealing
with theirs!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Where do you sweep the lies!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

I myself often leave the rug there but i know eventually it will have to be moved!.I dont like to see dirt either but you know its there!.!. we hate to see dirt in our lives but eventually it will come up !.!. So go ahead and clean it!.!.Dirt is with us all four seasons!. Good poem i liked it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

i tried hiding my empty beer bottles under the rug ,,,but people kept tripping over the lumps!.!.!.!.i don't invite people anymore!.!.!.!.that fixed that problem!.!.!.i found if you smash em !.!.!.they fit better!.!.!.!.!.!.[the beer bottles not the people]!.!.!.!.but come to!.think about it!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.seamanabWww@QuestionHome@Com

Mr Esoteric, having fun now!? The truth is usually hiding but beating it out with a stick!? Leaving the windows open!.!.!.let the stench of lies to air out!? You are covering for something, I guess truth!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

me heard of the truth under the table, and under the bed!. now it is under the rug!. now me know why they say watch your steps!. interesting write mr!. mixtli!. t!.y!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

The endless cycle of life!.!.!.!.dreading Spring cleaning 'cause ya only gotta do it all over again next year!.!.!.so, why!? Why bother!?

Good write, I like truth and


like a dog
on a rug
on a hot summer day

no wonder the lump in the winter!.!.!.


my truth
your truth
their truth
lets shove it all under the rug!.!.!.
!.!.!.dammit, lets just dance!.!. ok!?

Oh the poem!.!. nice!.
hair of the dog!.!. yup!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I am on this with BUK, "Where do you sweep the lies!?" Please do tell!. Thanks!.

Nice poem!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

This can't be about you, cuzzz, you don't have a dog!.

Clever, very clever!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I've spent my entire adult life tripping on things swept under the rug!.

EDIT: I just noticed "hair of the dog!." Was that a reference to drinking!? Or was it just coincidence!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

I TOLD you those orphan sentences would be adopted by a poem!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

The truth is a bug!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

thats sweet!.Www@QuestionHome@Com