this is a re post!. this poem is a bit abstract but if anyone can interpret it i would appreciate it!. it is my work but i would like to know what people's impressions are when they read it!. 10 points to the best analysis!. suggestions as to how to improve it will be greatly appreciated!. thank you
The forgotten
Cupid
Draw your arrows
And aim at our cold, bitter hearts
Let their golden heads pierce
The thick layer of confusion inside us
Let it dissolve in lonely places
We long to feel compassion
We long to experience love
Anything is better than
The swampy wasteland we inhabit
Gentle warrior
Work stealthily in the cool night
Bring along with you Eirene
Let her whisper the magical words
And change winter to spring
Let peace rain on us
We sit hoping to see bright horizons ahead
Will you forget us too!?
We sit in the hollows beneath
The vast emptiness
We sit waiting to be remembered
Must we live in oblivion!?
Or will someone hear our cries!?
Save us!
Waiting here is longer than perpetuity
Please save us from the nothingness we've become
We desperately wait
For our redemption dayWww@QuestionHome@Com