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Question: I set you free!.!.!. please comment!?
I set you free
But I imprison myself
I give you peace
But I keep none for myself
I give you joy
Yet I am plagued with misery
I tell you to have strength
When I am absolutely weak inside
I encourage you to live,
Laugh, smile and most importantly dream
Nevertheless the acrid taste of ruin
Lives in me
I am broken, shattered and empty
I set you free to soar the vast skies above
I will crawl in the arid wilderness
Do not cry my love
I am dead inside but
I will survive knowing that
Your dreams fly against the winds
I set you free because
I love you
I keep nothing for myselfWww@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
hmm!.!.we must always remember that we are our own person and to give yourself away like that, so completely, is!.!.for me, unimaginable, its almost like your writing this to a child (as a mother) - very heart-felt poem!.!.!.i really enjoyed reading it :)Www@QuestionHome@Com

That's actually really pretty <3
Please answer mine <3

i enjoyed it!. very raw!. perhaps a little too raw for its own good!? think about that!. either way it is in fine shape! good jobWww@QuestionHome@Com

It's only okayWww@QuestionHome@Com

That's pretty!. I like itWww@QuestionHome@Com