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Fifteen forever

Fifteen is a comfort
Like a fence
Broken in parts
With gaps
Through I can observe the world
With eyes unshielded
Before it is my time to climb over
Trying my best not to fall
As I jump to the other side

But the fence is only so strong
And will fall down as I do
No turning back
no protection
no more

As I learn through the gaps
On my side of the fence
The surroundings are more forgiving
And I cling onto my dwindling months
Hoping to be fifteen forever

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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
This is very nice to read and reread!. You have very deep feelings!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Great expression, here!.

I like it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

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