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Question: I need advice on this song /poem!. Is it good or bad!?
i don't have a title but here it goes!.

I promised you I'd love you!.
To stay here with you know!.
This is hard for me too,
To be without you!.

I'm staring at the door
because your not here anymore!.
Now, i promise to find you,
I'm starting my journey,beyond the stars!.

The journey over the million water!.
I walk across the final oceans,
just past the broken gates!.
I hope my journey doesn't end,
in devastating fates!.

I cry a million tears for you just to let you know I'm here!.
Hoping I wipe away all fears
during my journey into a black hole!.

I hear you heart beat
and fell the static rolling off your skin to mine!.
I focus my gaze,onto your face
but you're slowly slipping away!.

I meet some friends along the way,
but they tell me they cannot stay!.
I run from whats behind the darkness
but continuing my journey, to find
the light!.

I cry a million tears for you
just to let you know I'm here!.
Hoping i wipe away all fears!.
During my journey into the Sun!.

I walk up the street of broken dreams!.
I here a piercing cry cry!.
Someone attacking me from behind!.

I slowly turn around, and
there stands a beautiful vampirish-like creature,
and somehow i know it's you!.

I LOVE YOU!!!

the end!.!.!.!.!.sooo please leave me answers!.
-jazzybellWww@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
its good (:Www@QuestionHome@Com

It's confusing,
have you been watching Twilight!? lol :)Www@QuestionHome@Com