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Question: What do you think about these short poems!?
I named it
Why is that when I think of you
I get the butterflies in my stomach
A BIG smile comes on my face
Stress leaves my head!.

This is a different one!. =]
No matter what happens!.
No matter how i feel!.
I'll ALWAYS have a smile on for you!.

Yes, they are short!.
But can you please tell me what you think!.

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Short and sweet :)

I think it should have more explaining of why you feel so happy and why you will always smile for the person!.

keep writing :)

I enjoy poets who are not writing about depressing subjects :)Www@QuestionHome@Com

It's cute!. You've hit on and communicated something everyone can relate to!.

The first one reminds me of a song by the Beatles:

"I get high when I see you go by (my oh my)
When you sigh, my my inside just flies (butterflies)
Why am I so shy when I'm beside you!?
It's only love, and that is all
Why do I feel the way I do!?
It's only love, and that is all
But it's so hard loving you"Www@QuestionHome@Com

I think their nice!. Anything that tells about feelings I like!.Www@QuestionHome@Com