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I have started writing poetry!. I am considering using this poem to ask out a girl!. Please tell me if you think it is good or not!. Should I shorten it!? I probably won't have a time to ask her out soon, so I have plenty of time to change things about it:

I really didn't know the best way to say some things I want to say to you,
so I thought “I could write you a poem” and that's what I've decided to do!.
I don't really know exactly how good this poem is going to be!.
I guess you'll have to read it and maybe you can share your thoughts of it with me!.
Even though we somewhat know each other, I'd like to get to know you even better!.
That is one of the reasons that I am writing you this letter!.
From what I know of you, I can tell that you are very kind!.
You are funny, pretty, and caring!. That is why you are on my mind!.
I thought that maybe if you had the time, and if you wanted to
we could possibly go out sometime and find something to do!.
I will confess to you that in my entire life I've never asked a girl on a date,
but something about you has made me act!. I can no longer wait!.
I've had crushes on girls before, as most men tend to do,
but you are the first girl that I have ever really expressed my true feelings to!.
I don't know what it is inside of you, or what it is you've got
but it's something that I like, something that I like a lot!.
Finally getting to meet you has made such a change in me!.
For instance, it has made me wanting to write you this piece of poetry!.
I have other things I'd like to say to you but I do not really know
if to say these things would be proper, or if I should yet do so!.
I know that you are not around the same age as me!.
I didn't know if to go on a date would be OK, so I am asking you to see!.
If you think that this is something that you do not want to do,
that will be OK!. I will not be upset with you!.
If you decide that you do not want to go out in the end,
I will be willing to accept that, but I'd still like to be your friend!.
But if you think that going out with me is something that's OK,
just name to me the the place you want to go, the time, and the day!.
We can go somewhere together, to any place you want!.
We could go out to the movies or to a restaurant!.
We could go bowling if you wanted or go to a park and walk!.
We could just go somewhere quiet where the both of us could talk!.
I want to learn more about your life!. I want to learn more about you!.
I want to know what things you do and do not like to do!.
I want to know what makes you happy, I want to know what makes you sad!.
I want to know what gets you through the good times as well as through the bad!.
I want to know what makes you laugh, I want to know what makes you cry!.
I want to know your likes, your dislikes and all the reasons why!.
I want to know what kind of music, movies, and books you like and such!.
Please tell me about these things!. I want to know these things so much!.
Is there anything else that you can tell me about you!?
I really want to know these things!. I really, really do!.
Why do I want to know these things!? What is my reasoning!?
It is because I just find you so very interesting!.
To go out with you would really be such an honor for me!.
There are other things I want to tell you, things about me I'd like you to see!.
Can we go on a date!? I'll wait for your answer and see!.
I do not want to rush you, so I will just wait patiently!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

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this is extremely too long just fyi

I think for some reason she might think it's cute, but I think you should just kind of ease your way into a conversation and then pull the question!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Trash the poem and get some balls and just go ask her!.
At a personal level, I would never read something this long!.
I would prefer to just have the guy ask me out!.

That is absoloutley brilliant i love poetrey myself
i think that would concience anygirl on a dateWww@QuestionHome@Com

It's excellentWww@QuestionHome@Com

That's really cute, she'll definitely say yes!Www@QuestionHome@Com

That is really cute and will be really special to her!. I wish my boyfriend would do something like that!
Go for it!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Or you could say, would you like to go out on a date!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

I think it's very sweet!. Simple rhymes, and a long piece of poetry!. I love it! You seem cute :]Www@QuestionHome@Com

wow!.!.!.!.!.thats a long poem!.
longest poem ive ever seenWww@QuestionHome@Com

wow thats awesmoe what girl wouldnt say yes!?
might sound a little obsessive but really cuet!@!@!!!Www@QuestionHome@Com

just saying: i wouldn't ask her out with a poem because then it makes it harder for her to turn you down and she'll feel really guilty about it if she does!. not that i'm assuming she'll say no but you have to plan for the worst possible scenario!.
unless you're sure she'll say yes then i would just read it through and tweak a few small things!. and for sure make it a bit shorter!. otherwise, that's really sweet of you to write a poem for her!.
just ask her straight up!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I really like it, and I believe that poetry is one of the best ways to win a girls heart!. =]
The only thing you should differently is make it rhyme a little more in the middle and change the ending where it says you really, really want to know more about her because it make you seem too eager and that's not so good!.
But overall I love the poem, that'd be awesome if I were asked out that way, so I think you should give it to her!.!.!. hope I helped you out, good luck!. =]Www@QuestionHome@Com

There are a few ways this could go:
1!. Horribly
2!. She loves it
Two suggestions
Mabye do you want to go out with me might work a little better!.
If you go through with the poem make sure to leave an hour window to make sure you finish it!. ;)Www@QuestionHome@Com

Don't use the poem to ask her out!. It'll seem a little creepy if you haven't done things such as talked about/exchanged poetry before!.
also, the poem could use some work!.
My advice- Just ask the girl out!. She'll be impressed with just that!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

This is a nice poem !.!.!.!.but you seem desperate if you ask her out with this poem!. also she will think that you wanna know to much to soon!.!.!.I would skip the poem until a few more dates than you can write her poems!. I would find another way to ask her out!.Www@QuestionHome@Com