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In the car planted firmly between,
riding on console, she can be seen
in photo new, taken with webcam
our little Lucy, sweet as a lamb!.

Roscoe rides in back looking out rear
he's great in the car, we never hear
a word of complaint coming from him
but Lucy's spoiled and cries on a whim!.

To cheer her up I made a fun switch
removed avatar of one old b****
replaced it with Lucy for a smile
gotta go, home is only a mile!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Every dog has their day I guess, good stuff :)Www@QuestionHome@Com

Beautiful!.!.!.and I noticed the avatar switch earlier on!. I am something of a dog lover, myself (with the possible exception of some very small dogs)!.!.!.!.although my immediate family have never been dog owners in my lifetime!.

Like many of your other answerers, I can't agree with the second line of the last stanza!.!.!.!.in that the word you blocked out does not seem to fit you at all!. An enjoyable read overall, though!.

Edit: Yes!.!.!.!.I think I see just where you are coming from!. And once again!.!.!.!.this was an enjoyable read!.!.!.!.I loved it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Rhyme shmyme, I think it flows just fine!

I used to have a dog like yours, Ma, only she was mixed, looked like the colors of a chocolate chip cookie!.!.!.!.!.her name was Cookie Calhoun, hehehe!.

CC, RIP!. (she lived to be 19 in people years, according to my mother, CC died in the late nineties)!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I'm going to argue with the "old bi*ch thing but otherwise how cute! My Clementine cries if not sitting in my lap with head out window (seatbelted in, of course)!.

Oh, Ma, you're not writing and driving are you!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

Hey ,,,Who you calling an old B**ch!?!? ,,,,,,Ohhhh Scuze me Ma !.!.!.!.!.
Just kidding around!.!.!.!.!.!.!.Perfect name for the mobile device Picture pretty good too!.!.!.!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Very good!.!. well Roscoe is charming!.!.Lucy will be ok!.!. she's not use to this!. But you know you gotta do what ya gotta do!. To me there was never and old B****!.!.!.just a warm hearted person!.Lucy is beautiful!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Got some nice rhyme going on there, Ma!. What a cutie!. Do they get along well together!? And, what B!.B!. said,you are just driving and nothing else, right!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

Lucy's is really adorable!. And I like your old avatar a lot!. You are a white haired sage!.

How about one of ma (TM) & Lucy, and possibly Pa!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

Loved the poem!. Love the dog!. Miss your pic!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Calling yourself names!? lol Lucy needs to give you some loving!. Great picture!. Your pack is growing!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Hi love it hope shes happy now hugs to you allWww@QuestionHome@Com

As cute as Lucy is I dont think anyone can call you that name you blocked there Ma!.!.That would be very unpleasantWww@QuestionHome@Com

Great keep up the good work!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Ahh lucy, why the long face!?


I like the rhyming stuff better!.So well done Ma!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Nice poem dear!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

You old dog you!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

lol @ ******
it made me smileWww@QuestionHome@Com

i love!.!.!.!.!.


I agree with Bluebell!.!.!.
err!.!.!.except for the Clemintine part!.!.!.
and it's BJ who is nervous in the car!.!.Ben takes it in stride!.
so to speak!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Hehehe!.!.!.hate em all ya want!.!.!.still cute! Give the dogs a pat!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Too funny!.

Poor paw drivin'
with all the bit
ch s

hee heeWww@QuestionHome@Com