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Question: New original poem! Lend me your thoughts!?
Rich Man

We advertise an image, but it’s just not for me
There’s a way that we must look, to impress society
The world is burning, it's filled with fire
Our lives are lost, in our hopeless desire

We always buy what we don’t need
We’re all consumed by the filthy greed
We all adore the dollar bill
This life we live is going downhill

Money’s fake just a human tool
Don’t obsess you crazy fool
It won’t buy love or heal your pain
All it does is make you insane

Take it away far from me
The rich man’s blind and can not see
He’s lost love for all other things
The day he saw those fancy rings

Let it die, will you just move on
Where will you be, when the money’s gone!?Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Wow!. Thats really good, and it portrays alot of prospective and opinion about money!.
It makes good points, and I really like it!.

12/10Www@QuestionHome@Com

It's good, flows well too!.!. :)
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Perhaps take a look at mine!? :)
I liked it, thanks for sharing xxWww@QuestionHome@Com