old and stale
has lost its taste
a morsel once savored
now bland
taste buds become
receptors to none
appetite wanes
unpiqued
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has lost its taste a morsel once savored now bland taste buds become receptors to none appetite wanes unpiqued yet hunger continues to lingerWww@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: there is so much poetricky love in me like 2 packets of active dry yeast waiting to mix with warm liquids and a heap of mashed spuds and rise not once but twice to be punched and shaped to dinner rolls or maple oblongsWww@QuestionHome@Com Yes, many!. Literally!. This poem is brilliant! I am a writer myself (and a former professional lyricist)!. I love poetry that speaks to me!. This one not only does that, it presents to the mind an undeniable dire world condition!. Bless you!.Www@QuestionHome@Com I most certainly have!. Nice poetic expression!. Hunger, but nothing tastes good, as when my head is stuffed up!. Time for a hot shower, a good book, quiet time and wait for seeping inspiration!. Thanks Ma!Www@QuestionHome@Com I've been blessed with loving & enjoying reading poetry!. However, I am not a poet!. Everyone, even our illustrious poets here, have a "stale" day!. But recall: "yet hunger continues to linger"Www@QuestionHome@Com That's correct on alot of counts!.Some days are just hum drum!. Just now i took a bite of apple and it didnt have alot of flavor!. Good poem!.Www@QuestionHome@Com MA!!!! "I'm comin beenie boyyyyyy" (Hanna Barberra, Beanie and Cecil, *erk showing age* I think) *Hands Ma fresh batteries* That was very good for me!. Was it!.!.!.!.!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com My apettite for remaining here in Y/A is fast waning now MA, my ardent admirer is hanging around me like a very bad smell yet again!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com absotively, posilutely, yessum!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Momma said they'll be days like this !.!.!.They'll be days like this Momma said ,,Momma saidWww@QuestionHome@Com Normally, when I sit down to write a poem, I do not have days like that!. But, I can relate!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Yes but not just poetry days!. Everything about the day!.Www@QuestionHome@Com My hunger continues to linger :)Www@QuestionHome@Com When favorite attractions have lost their charm - time to move on and explore - what's the harm!? ?Www@QuestionHome@Com Yes, most days!. nfd?Www@QuestionHome@Com Oh, yes I have seen days like this!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Like trying to fill up on Saltines!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Everyday is like this for me I look in the mirror, a skeleton I see!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Yup!. Dry as a bone today!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Yes!. I can smell it cooking!.Www@QuestionHome@Com yes! you got it absolutely right!!!!!Www@QuestionHome@Com yupWww@QuestionHome@Com whiskey's!.!.!.!.!.!. !.!.!.!.!.running dry too, ma!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com |