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Question: Are some poetry days like this to you!?
old and stale
has lost its taste
a morsel once savored
now bland
taste buds become
receptors to none
appetite wanes
unpiqued

yet hunger
continues
to
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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
there is so much
poetricky
love in me
like
2 packets of active
dry yeast
waiting to mix
with warm liquids
and a heap of mashed
spuds
and rise not once
but twice to be
punched and shaped
to dinner
rolls or maple
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Yes, many!. Literally!. This poem is brilliant! I am a writer myself (and a former professional lyricist)!. I love poetry that speaks to me!. This one not only does that, it presents to the mind an undeniable dire world condition!. Bless you!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I most certainly have!. Nice poetic expression!. Hunger, but nothing tastes good, as when my head is stuffed up!. Time for a hot shower, a good book, quiet time and wait for seeping inspiration!. Thanks Ma!Www@QuestionHome@Com

I've been blessed with loving & enjoying reading poetry!. However, I am not a poet!. Everyone, even our illustrious poets here, have a "stale" day!.

But recall:
"yet hunger
continues
to
linger"Www@QuestionHome@Com

That's correct on alot of counts!.Some days are just hum drum!. Just now i took a bite of apple and it didnt have alot of flavor!. Good poem!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

MA!!!! "I'm comin beenie boyyyyyy" (Hanna Barberra, Beanie and Cecil, *erk showing age* I think)

*Hands Ma fresh batteries*

That was very good for me!. Was it!.!.!.!.!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

My apettite for remaining here in Y/A is fast waning now MA, my ardent admirer is hanging around me like a very bad smell yet again!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

absotively, posilutely, yessum!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Momma said they'll be days like this !.!.!.They'll be days like this Momma said ,,Momma saidWww@QuestionHome@Com

Normally, when I sit down to write a poem, I do not have days like that!. But, I can relate!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Yes but not just poetry days!. Everything about the day!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

My hunger continues to linger :)Www@QuestionHome@Com

When favorite attractions have lost their charm - time to move on and explore - what's the harm!? ?Www@QuestionHome@Com

Yes, most days!.

nfd?Www@QuestionHome@Com

Oh, yes I have seen days like this!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Like trying to fill up on Saltines!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Everyday is like this for me
I look in the mirror, a skeleton I see!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Yup!. Dry as a bone today!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Yes!. I can smell it cooking!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

yes!

you got it absolutely right!!!!!Www@QuestionHome@Com

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whiskey's!.!.!.!.!.!.

!.!.!.!.!.running dry too, ma!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com