Ah, I so can't write poems that don't rhyme..........help with line brea

Question: Ah, I so can't write poems that don't rhyme!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.help with line breaks!?

Isn’t it curious how scent can revive the fondest of memories!?
Your mind aglow, infatuated,
Your heart beats ever faster,
A surge of fizzing desire overcomes you;
A thousand frenzied butterflies collide within,
each one determined to find its way out
of that intricate cat's cradle of sentiment!.

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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

I can't tell if the vibes relate to love or lust but it takes me on an internal journey that is very pleasant as the words don't offend but comfort!. Your very nice with words!. Please keep playing and never mind rhyme or not; they are your words along with your muse!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

each one determined to find its way
out of that intricate net of sentiment!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

It is good!.!.!. But I would suggest that you use another word for 'infatuated'!.!.!. The mind is alert but troubled!? Hmm!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I think your line breaks are fine, and that's the first piece of decent poetry I've ever read on here!Www@QuestionHome@Com

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