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Question: My friend wrote this, and she wants to know what i think of it!. I think its really good, so hbu!?
btw, and i quote, "make sure nobody steals this!." i have no ideas why she wanted me to say that but o well!.
Heartbreak
Watching you walk away
Having my friends tell you you’re gay
Feeling empty inside
You don’t know how much I cried
Getting over you
Derek( any name) who!?
Watching you take and take
Having my heart break and break
Just another girl
In this big big world
A typical guy
Whose always the first one to say bye
A player like always
Throw my heart away
Told me you would love me till my dying day
Trusting you
Betraying me
That’s never how its suppose to be
What went wrong
We were together for so long
How long has this been going on,
Behind my back,
All along
I think we both agree
That we were never meant to beWww@QuestionHome@Com
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
i think it is good, its honest, and is based on an experience you or your friend had, experiences help with making poems sound better
i write poems myself and i normally write stuff like this poem because i just write about events and exprinces that occur in my life!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
like, 7!.9/10!.
it's good, i like it!. it's just a bit choppy, and parts of it feel very cliche, but for the most part it does a good job of explaining the author's emotion!. good job, author!. lol!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Think it's pretty good!. Send it in to a magazine that accepts poems, short stories, etc!. You never know it may appear in their next edition!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
It's pretty good!.
BTW i'm pretty sure YOU are the author of thisWww@QuestionHome@Com