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Question: Does anyone understand what im saying here!? forgotten warriors!.!.!.comment!?
im trying to be a bit abstract here, does anyone get what im talking about!?can you please attempt a summary of it!. thank you to everyone who tries!. 10 points to the best analysis!.

Forgotten warriors

Cupid

Draw your arrows

And aim at our cold, bitter hearts

Let their golden heads pierce

The thick layer of confusion inside us

Let it dissolve in lonely places

We long to feel compassion

We long to experience love

Anything is better than

The swampy wasteland we inhabit

Gentle warrior

Work stealthily in the cool night

Bring along with you Eirene

Let her whisper the magical words

And change winter to spring

Let peace rain on us

We sit hoping to see bright horizons ahead

Will you forget us too!?

We sit in the hollows beneath

The vast emptiness

We sit waiting to be remembered

Must we live in oblivion!?

Or will someone hear our cries!?

Save us!

Waiting here is longer than perpetuity

Please save us from the nothingness we've become

We desperately wait

For our redemption day


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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
This is a fairly good poem!. I read it in this way:

Oh, love, save us from the awful doom of solitude in mind and body!. Our lives are unendurable without that salvation!.


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