Comments on some thoughts of poetry?

Question: Comments on some thoughts of poetry!?

some verses are as though
the poet were a sexpert
toying with their thought
in languid foreplay

others read like one night stands
words quickly laid out
wham, bam, thank you ma'am
care for a smoke, my dear!?

then a few should be deemed illegal
the criminal way they overpower
leaving you victim of their rape
haunting the recesses of your mindWww@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

See!? These are the types of "wow" moments that prevent me from posting!. My crap is just that!.!.!.!.crap!.
Love you, Ma!Www@QuestionHome@Com

one night stands mostly, from this kid, but every so often, I like to think, I ravage my reader like a fearsome beast on the wedding night!!

'course, being a man, I probably overestimate/measure myself most of the time!

fun write!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

This I feel is one of your best!.But what do I know!.I just know what I like!.I am a simple woman with simple thoughts!.But thought a lot about this verse!.Read it three times!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

That's where the reader comes in!. Some of us like a romantic interlude !. Nothing quick, no night stands but something more memorable!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Hmm!.!.!.I hope through practice, trial, and error !.!.!.to be able to deliver all three!.!.!.don't want to be predictable in bed! Oh!.!.!.I mean in poetry!.!.!.!.

Good write here Ma!. It's smooth!.!.well laid !. (pun intended)Www@QuestionHome@Com

Very amusing write! I enjoyed it very much! It tells Me why I like to read poems,rather than try to write them! I don't want to haunt the recesses of anyone"s mind! lolWww@QuestionHome@Com

So which type of poetry do you like!? I like sonnets!. I won't tell you which type though! lol A good write, very descriptive of types of love poems!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

One of your most interesting poems, it reads really well out loud!.
Smooth all the way through!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Makes my imagination run rampant!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

and others read!.!.!.!.!.!.

!.!.!.!.!.!.!.like a drunken!.!.!.!.

!.!.!.uneducated bum!.!.!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Cut!
Print it!Www@QuestionHome@Com

I agree! Nice thoughts!Www@QuestionHome@Com

That is so cool :)Www@QuestionHome@Com

What are the options if the "My Dear" doesn't smoke Ma!.!.!.!.hehe
Sorry, just a passing silly thought !.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

This one is way cool!.

I also like the ones that
"use me"!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Oh, dear! I think I'll be making love to my bed sooner than expected there, Ma!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Done!?!?,,,,,,,,, What do ya mean your done!?!?!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.

I always want more ,,,,Ma !.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.Never enoughWww@QuestionHome@Com