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Question: Is this too lame a write to even bother commenting on!?
Find

Find in your heart
the words to describe
the soul of the one you love

Find in your soul
the music to describe
the heart of the one you love

Then

Find in you core
the courage to speak
the words about the one you love

Find in your core
the courage to sing
the music about the one you love

And finally

Listen
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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
I would love to sing this!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I first thought of lyrics to a song!.
I think it is!.

On YouTube type "instrumentals"!. Various music will appear!. Read this while you listen / search for a beat you like!.!.!.!. then expand the verse maybe!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

No - I post lots of "lame" stuff on here and this isn't lame!. Plus - I don't think think people are that much of poetry snobs to slam you!.

That being said - Work with it, there's a lot of good fodder here!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

form time to time i prick my nose to remove all the waste and dirt inside of it,i think today you have done the same thing here!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Most words lacks power until they are combined; beauty, love and music are there to enjoy!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

It is not lame
at allWww@QuestionHome@Com

I very much enjoy your works!. Keep it up!. This one is sweet simplicity and left me with a smile!. Nothing that makes you smile is lame!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

This is superb - crisp and to the point!. My only suggestion would be to replace "and finally" with "now!."Www@QuestionHome@Com

No!. It's a very sweet thought!. Don't apologize or put yourself down!. I think it is even uplifting!.

I like it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Tender words, important last line!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Simply sweet!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Seek, and you will find!. It's a lovely poem!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

No!. And lovely advice it is!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I've got lots of searching to do!.
A nice poem!. I suppose if we seek it, we'll find it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com