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Question: These words just slipped off my keyboard into poetic form, Do they mean something!?
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Au contraire…


Felt undercurrent in the air,
The thrill seemed quite contrived
Her mind was set to argue strong
So long had been deprived

As words were slung in petulance
The room fell deathly still
And swept out sweet and opulent
From hand upon the quill

What reverie would be complete!?
What argument preserved
When torn asunder pages blew
The writer quite unnerved

And faint of heart she slipped away
Silent heart beat this night
Words will linger pages blowing
Abruptly, left the fight


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The best word I can apply to this work is "cerebral!." This is a very intelligent piece of writing!. A delightful read!. A feast for a hungry mind!.

Very nice flow of words and ideas!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

If words of this magnitude just slip off Your keyboard! I can hardly imagine what great words You would pen,when You really put Your heart and soul into it!! BEAUTIFUL WRITE!! OUTSTANDING!Www@QuestionHome@Com

They mean you are an incredible writer!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

!.!.!.left the fight
of shifted flight
radiant light
heart beats of the night
i'll hold you tight!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

very nice Ars Libre !.!.!. I like that you increased you use of verbs and adjectives, brought a lot of life to this poem!. Excellent!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Dang, why doesn't that happen to me!!!!Www@QuestionHome@Com

I don't know if it means anything, but I likeWww@QuestionHome@Com

AWESOME!!.!. i was hoping to hear a poem from u tonight!.!.!.sleep well!.!.!.!. i got this in my e-mail 5 hours lateWww@QuestionHome@Com

wow this is incredible r u tellin me u wrote this,

heart attack u write like shakespear,

i am so shocked how old r u may i ask cuz this work could get u far if this is what you write get it published!.

there was once i had the same thing happen i was in my maths class on a computer and i ended up wrtin a 3 page poem titled Bumble bee!.

Which was about a man writin to his daughter from a prison cell apologizin for the years of abuse her and her mother went thru it was reali in depth and at the end the father told his daughter where her mother had been takin from the protection agency and told his daughter (whom he calls bumble bee) to go find her!.

Finally at the end he tells her he is dying but before the letter ends he states "but not being with u thats my living hell!."


It made my friends cry!.Www@QuestionHome@Com