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An Angel


They are very soft and bright
And are luminous at night
They have thin and silky hair
That will never be able to tear

There wings are made of feathers
Which are all closely together
An angel is a lot like a star
Because there seen from very far

An angel will always be by your side
And will never leave you and hide
Every angel has a thing over their head
That they first get after being dead

Whoosh is what you hear when they fly
All you need to do is look at the sky
For ever and ever an angel will live
And will have plenty to give

This angel will return to its peaceful cloud
Where it’s opposite of the earth which is loud
Up in the sky which is very ,very high
Lies the cloud which is very ,very nigh

The angels eyes are a flower
Which are seen with a lot of power
They can make you happy or sad
But most of the time your mainly glad

They are very soft and bright
Will you stay with me tonight
Forever and Ever you will stay
Even if you don’t I’ll still PrayWww@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Yes!. Your lyric poem is good to very good!.
All you need to do is check your spelling (there are a few errors)!.
Correct the spelling errors!.
If I were your teacher, instructor, professor!.!.!.
and you'd submitted this for grading!.!.!.
I would definitely give you an A!.
{Can you tell from my writing here that I'm a bit of a poet, too!?
And, isn't it fun and a freeing kind of a feeling to know that you don't even have to worry about punctuation at all in lyric poetry!?
--Just, please look at the words like --"Their" wings -rather than there--1st word, 2nd stanza of poem!.
--And "you're"--rather than your--4th line of next to last stanza!.
***Change those words!. That's all!. It's a lovely poem!. Well done!.Www@QuestionHome@Com