Just a little something i wrote, your oppinion would be greatly appreciated?

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Question:

PONDERING SLUMBER

IN THE SOFT SHADOWS BEFORE DAWN
WHEN IT IS NOT YET DAY
NOR IS IT NIGHT
THE STARS SLOWLY TURNING OUT THEIR LIGHTS
MY PULSE QUICKENS AS I AWAKE FROM MY SLUMBER
MY MOUTH DRY AND GRIT IN MY EYES!.
THE WORLD IS SILENT WAITING TO BE AWOKEN
BUDS OF FLOWERS SLOWLEY UNCURLING!.
I WONDER WHAT THIS NEW DAY WILL BRING
AS I LAY IN MY SLUMBER
MY MIND BEGINS TO PONDER
DO OTHERS THINK LIKE I!?
CAN WE THINK WITHOUT A THOUGH!?
CAN WE REASON WITH OUT A REASON!?
CAN WE LOVE WITHOUT BEING LOVED!?
I STRETCH MY LIMBS AS I PONDER
A NEW DAY, SOME THING NEW TO WONDER
YET THERE IS ONE THING I AM CERTAIN
AND WILL ALWAYS REMAIN CLEAR
THAT IN MY END OF DAYS
WHEN MY YEARS ARE NUMBERED
I WILL BE HAPPY FOR WHAT I KNOW
AND HAPPIER YET, FOR WHAT I DON’T!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

I really like this !.!. actually i quite love it!. i have a friend who is an archaeologist who would really appreciate something like this!. He is constantly happy and content with not knowing what the bones and cultures of history don't tell him and even though not knowing the answer to something annoys me i like not knowing what will happen to me every day!.

that's what makes me like this poem it's really well written you just need to spell check a bit!. :DWww@QuestionHome@Com

I like it!. It has cool images and all that!. I thought the questions were a little cliched, but the end is awesome, as is the rest of the poem!. I think you captured the feeling of being between night and day, and how dreamy and ethereal it feels, very well!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Would be better without ALL CAPS!.

You are not a reverse e!.e!. cummings!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Wow, thats deep

good jobWww@QuestionHome@Com

It okWww@QuestionHome@Com

nice poemWww@QuestionHome@Com