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Question: Heyy (; can somebody write me something to add to this song/poem!.!?
it's supposed to be a song but i could'nt think of anything to add!. it seems more of a poem thought!.
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Feeling lost in a crowd
looking around
does anyone know!?
what i've been through
does anyone care!?
when i shed a tear
looking around
no where to be found
does anyone know!?
does anyone care!?
out here on my own
please give me a sign
cus im just fading awayWww@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
becoming what you fear the most
losing what you never had
living how you thought impossible
dying inside because that's all you know
cus im just fading away
washing away filth no one can see
spitting out the taste of anger
hearing echos of expectations
dying inside because that's all you know
cus im just fading away
to see what is not there
to be what you can not see
to have what is not yours
to beg for what is not given
to die because that's all you know
cus im just fading awayWww@QuestionHome@Com

and away i'll be!.!.!.
and yet, it'll make no difference to no one!.!.!.
do you all have a heart!?
or just a stone in its place!?!?
'cause i'm crying here!.!.!.
and you go away!.!.!.
you're busy with your work!.!.!.
so much that you can't spare time for me!

life's a big challenge and i'm facing it all!.!.
all i ask for is a little help!.!.
is it a little too much!?!?
'cause i'm fading away!.!.!.
and no one cares!.!.!.
i'll fall down!.!.
and there'll be no one to catch me!.!.!.

do you know me!?
i guess not!.!.
do you care!?!?
the answer is no!.!.
had i been you!.!.
you would have taken care- a lot!.!.!.
but i'm not you!.!.!.
so you just go away!.!.!.
and here i am!.!.!.
i'm just fading away!.!.!.!.

:)Www@QuestionHome@Com

please give me a sign
cus im just fading away
!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.
just sailing way
on my lonesome
do you see me!?
why dont you come!?
I know you see me
why do you run!?


doesnt feel finished, but its a suggestion!

Good luck!Www@QuestionHome@Com

im lost in time
when i see everyone around
i think of how there lives must be fine
while mine is not
but no one knows
the pain i go through


thats all i got, hope i helped!. love your poem=]!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

so it ends at cuz i'm just fading away so my addition is:
there's just no way to say
how alone i am
without any plans
a tear sliding down my face
losing myself at the base

hope that helps!Www@QuestionHome@Com

NO WAY!
So you can make a platinum album and be on MTV off something great I wrote for you

If I can't be a superstar why should you :-)Www@QuestionHome@Com

just throw me a line
a look, a touch, anything at all
i am standing here
don't you hear my call
!.!.!.!.!.!.

that's all i gotWww@QuestionHome@Com

I'm counting on you to find me
Bring me back to where I was
Does anyone care!?



Sorry it's not muchWww@QuestionHome@Com