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Question: New poem I wrote for a module in college!.what do you think!?
The assignment is to write a poem on how you feel about love right now!.I want to have it perfected before I hand it up because I need a distinction!. I want it to be kind of simple!.




I found my someone

Someone who holds your hand without you having to hint!.
Someone you would not be ashamed to bring out with your family!.
someone who you know your family will love!.

Someone who you feel comfortable with,
a comfort you never knew before!.

Someone you laugh with over the simplest of things,
who makes you feel beautiful for the first time in your life!.

Someone who, when they hold you,
they make you feel like you are in the safest place in the world,
without them even trying!.

Someone to whom you are not embarrassed to show your vunribilities!.
Someone who makes you smile a real, everlasting smile!.

But is it right that that someone makes die a little inside,
because even though you have found them,
they have not found you!?Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
It's lovely Nicole, well done !

Is it based on your real feelings at the moment !? that you have found somebody, and love them, but they haven't yet found you and love you back!?

I guess it is sad if it is true, but i hope it works out for you!.!.!.

In any case, it is very well written and with feeling!.

ps, another typo!.!.!.it should be vulnerabilities !

Take care, xWww@QuestionHome@Com

It is kind of boring!. also it is very repetitive!. Some poems have a nice beat to them when they are repetitive, but this one, not so much!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I love it! it really shows what you are feeling in the present!. Like someone still searching!. Someone who has dreams!. I really like it!Www@QuestionHome@Com