Wrote this, it's pretty boring, lol it's a haiku though, right!? :) x
Lone star flickering,
Longing to be admired,
Lost in the night sky!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
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Lone star flickering, Longing to be admired, Lost in the night sky!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: Yep!. I like your second attemp better!.Www@QuestionHome@Com I think a haiku should be: line 1 - 5 syllables line 2 - 7 syllables line 3 - 5 syllables so that would mean sadly yours isn't!! You may find the link below useful!!Www@QuestionHome@Com Pretty cool :) Haiku's are nice as they can easily get a certain message across!.Www@QuestionHome@Com neatWww@QuestionHome@Com It lack a kijo, a seasonal word !.!.!. so it falls in line with a senjenWww@QuestionHome@Com |