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Question: Haiku!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!?
Wrote this, it's pretty boring, lol it's a haiku though, right!? :) x

Lone star flickering,
Longing to be admired,
Lost in the night sky!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


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Yep!. I like your second attemp better!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I think a haiku should be:

line 1 - 5 syllables
line 2 - 7 syllables
line 3 - 5 syllables

so that would mean sadly yours isn't!!

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Pretty cool :) Haiku's are nice as they can easily get a certain message across!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

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It lack a kijo, a seasonal word !.!.!. so it falls in line with a senjenWww@QuestionHome@Com