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Here I am, sipping lemonade,
There you are, watching the parade,
people in costumes throw confetti
later I'm gonna have spaghetti!.

You love the blue of the sky,
hurts so much to say good bye,
please won't you keep moving forward,
but still don't be too straightforward

These are my feelings for you,
don't pull away; maybe do,
'cause today there's me and there's you,
I don't want to see this day through

It's like I'm out of control,
the preacher's face has a mole,
I don't know who Jesus is,
but he had a knack for show biz

I'm just gonna tell you the truth
Saw your pics from photobooth
that you put on your Facebook
I just had to go have a look

I know it might sound lame
Although they were all the same
You know I looked at each one
'Cause I think you might be the one

If you love me don't tell me,
Prefer your magical spell, me
and I want this to lead to something
if you get me, I like that lump thing!.

I see you across the floor,
you are the one I adore,
This love has only begun
'cause I think you may be the one

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