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each one of us has storm brewing within us!.
love i have heard heals everything,but what if the wound was caused by love itself!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

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Make it stop!.
Make it stop!.

My hearts incessant plea
when he broke it without a thought!.

Lost, Lost was I
Tears never ran dry

Full of hope, love, companionship
I was suddenly nowhere, beginning of my trial!.

It's been 13 months since,
the number always had intruded us

my heart healing,
but melts awhile

remembering!.!.!.!.!.!.
remembering!.!.!.!.!.!.

But, Make it stop!.
Make it stop!.

I got lost in your poem remembering my own's demise!. Great read!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

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Sadly we cannot use "shape" techniques here on Y/A!. This poem would have even more "impact" if we/ you could!.

!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.ears
!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.that don't
!.!.!.!.!.hear a heart
!.!.!.!.!.!.!.that won't
!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.listen
!.!.!.!.!.!.how do you
!.!.!.!.break through
!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.the wall
!.!.!.!.hemorraging
!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.Love
!.!.!.!.!.!.!.so deep
!.!.!.!.!.is the wound
!.!.!.!.your weapon
!.!.!.!.!.!.of choice
!.!.!.!.!.make it go
!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.away
!.!.screaming tears
!.!.!.!.like thunder
!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.drop
!.!.a storm rages
!.!.!.within me
!.!.!.!.make it
!.!.!.!.!.!.stop
!.!.!.!.make it
!.!.!.!.!.!.stopWww@QuestionHome@Com

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Beautifully expressed emotion!.
Keep writing to help it stop!.

maWww@QuestionHome@Com

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This is powerful, Like hitting your head against a wall, make it stop is
right, how important is it, walk away!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

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i am on my knees as you are reading this,beauty with brains such a combination is rare to find!.

i m speechless!.words betray me !.Www@QuestionHome@Com

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You've heard this before: time heals!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

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needs salt

-Www@QuestionHome@Com

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