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Green Olive
Democracy
!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.

Perhaps then he’d
smile and they
would smile
and everyone could
smile because smiles
are nice and happy and
there would be
less blood

They could lay him
at The Mall

Spread him
before millions
drill him hard
cut trinkets from his gut
bathe in his spray pattern
dust his questionables
shift junk inside out
and dish it to higher numbers
to robes, to relative relatives
to the crooners the
only We believers
jointed dividers
beggar givers
rejoicing ;
“Look Lord
he chose this
he's free
willing
look …!.
we found
an
Olive”!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
He is willing to be exposed, laid out there for all to see and judge!. There is promise!? You can't please everyone!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I guess the Obama reference came in with the mention of the word "Mall"!. Something/someone that gains great notoriety and respect - wanted and known my millions - standing for all the hopes and expectations of thousands - tends to be abused and torn limb by limb - for all desire a piece of the divine!. What is most desired for all is destroyed by massive personal needs ?Www@QuestionHome@Com

first stanza is a prayer!.!.!.!.

!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.we all want to be answered!.!.!.!.

!.!.!.but from the looks of the things goin on right now!.!.!.!.!.!.

!.!.!.!.!.i doubt it if "they" allow it!.!.!.!.

!.!.!.to be answered!.!.!.!.!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Your conception of happy is not the same as mine, too gorey to be
considered happy!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

^^^^ I've found the willing subject!.!. (throws net over his head)
and I smiled

bwhahaha!.!.!. wow, an olive!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

This poem is incredibly well written!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

WIll Obama make it through the end of the day!?
Yes and he will undoubtedly say,
OliveWww@QuestionHome@Com

I love olive!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Now that would make people smile!.

all caught up
let freedom ring on this happy dayWww@QuestionHome@Com

I agree with Buk!.
I didn't understand at first, but now I do!.!.!.thanks!.
Quite brilliant, actually!.

maWww@QuestionHome@Com

I agree with Buk and Ma :DWww@QuestionHome@Com

This reminded me of the Ayatollah Khomeini's funeral procession and the human comedy that it turned into!. How many righteous people laughed each time they dropped him to the ground!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

an olive
did we find it square in the middle
of the round thing on his shoulders!?
was is stuffed with a piemento poking out!?
!.!.!.!.!.I would like to observe a second of silence
G'dayWww@QuestionHome@Com

I'll never divide up my joints!.!.!. I think its questionable that you beg me to do so!.!.!.!. rejoice in *this spray pattern!.!.!.!. *pisses out his territory near the camp site*!.!.!. got a light twiggy!? !.!.!.*puffwha* ^^Www@QuestionHome@Com