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Question: What is this poem really saying!?
dogs crapped
upon snow
its warmth
made it sink
it didn't
show
hidden far down
below

yard looked pristine
delightfully white
enjoyed the view
with
crap out of sight

weather has changed
snow's melted away
there is the crap
still having its sayWww@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
It says: hide your crap(bad intentions) with sweet talk, cover your dark motives with sparkling white sheets(snow)!.When the sun of truth rises, your crap will be seen, because it never diminish!.

Very good, ma! This poem is more than Lovable!Www@QuestionHome@Com

In the mind numbing cold
feeling now oh so very old
bent over, forced to chip away ice
wondering is this the price!?
Images of crap under melting snow
like my life, so apropos
but thoughts of spring stench
swearing in french between teeth's clench
flying ice chips hit my eye
a piece of crap perhaps!.!.!.sigh!.

This poem says to me (!.!.judging by the time stamp)
You were in my frickin' mind!.!.

stop dat!.
;)Www@QuestionHome@Com

Lol when i saw this question i would of thought it would be like a deep emotional poem like a peice from Edgar Allen Poe or Robert Frost but boy was i wrong lol! =) I guess it means that dog crap lasts forever if you don't clean it up! =)Www@QuestionHome@Com

No matter how pretty you make s**t, its still ****, cover it up, paint it, put some flowers on it, s**t is S**t, kind of like you can put lipstick on a pig!.!.!.but its still a pig!.!.!.!.

Even if you do clean it up though, the stench of what was never quite goes away

Love this poemWww@QuestionHome@Com

You can mask "crap" briefly and just when you think things are going well and the sun begins to shine, the crap reappears!. LESSON: Eradicate the "crap" completely or it will resurface just as pungent as it was before!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

when I first read it I just thought how it is like when there is something going on inside a person, and they pretend that everything is beautiful and fine, but someday it is going to come and and show itself to the world!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

You can try and hide the crap and mess in your life but it will always resurface!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Be very careful where you make snow angels!.
Keep your mouth closed in an avalanche!.
Maybe one should avoid snowball fights!.

Peace!.

Addendum:
Very impressive, Flyaway Bill (Bill F); name dropper!. Cool!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

It's a snow job, the excrement is still there it's just not so obvious!.

"Watch out where the huskies go & don't you eat that yellow snow"Www@QuestionHome@Com

you can try to hide, but we know you're still thereWww@QuestionHome@Com

crap's crap!.!.!.!.!.!.

!.!.!.!.!.with or without the snow!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

hope floats

or one can hope for snow

or snow isn't the answer

it's only a temporary reprieve!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Crap happens!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

idk the crap is still there!.and it doesnt go away!?!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

idk crap stays!?!?!?!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

sh*t happens and it won't go away by covering it up, you have clean it upWww@QuestionHome@Com

It means you have to get the old sh!t shovel out! How ya doing Ma :)Www@QuestionHome@Com

Dont' talk
shiiit
Cuz shittt talks
back!?

Doo
unto others !?

Change your unders
before they
melt!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

*Don't go lookin for the poop!.!.* waves atcha!.!.hey Ma!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

How about!.!.!.!.we don't know what's under the surface, even after we saw it once before!?
lol IDK!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Dear friend, this is verse, not poetry, however deep you may think it is, and there are possibilities were it not the merest doggerel!. Strongly suggest you read Robert Graves', "The White Goddess", before making another attempt!. If you "get it", you might have it withing you to write something of value!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Ahh this reminds me of the "**** spring" I had 2 years ago!. I never had a dog before, never had my own house before!. I honestly thought letting the dog "go" in the backyard would be no biggie!. I thought it would freeze, then somehow melt and then like fertilize the grass!. (I'm really not that stupid!.) Then the first melt came and I had to clean it up - that's what this poem makes me feel!. The 2006 **** spring!. (Can I say ****!?)Www@QuestionHome@Com