What say you? Is this worth keeping as is or does it need more?

Question: What say you!? Is this worth keeping as is or does it need more!?

Have you gone away
and left me
!.!.!.!.!.!.!.to wonder
where you are

your passion stirred
!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.me
to the brink
!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.and now
I sit and think
what do this
!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.I for
pleasure
!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.or for more

I dare say
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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

Have you gone away and left me to wonder where you are your passion stirred me to the brink and now I sit and think what do this I for pleasure or for more I dare say more!.

It reads like a long, unpunctuated sentence!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

For me, the dots are not in the right place, but what do I know!.

your passion stirred
me
!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.to the brink

I stumbled with, what do this I for!.

Yes it's worth keeping!. smiles and gigglesWww@QuestionHome@Com

I wouldn't trash it I like it The dots are a little off that's what was throwing me It Does Not Suck!! A little re work that's allWww@QuestionHome@Com

Bin it!. Start again with a different approach!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I get it!. Don't trash it!. Save it and !.!.!.make it better!.Www@QuestionHome@Com