Donkey shouting
in open
kids playing
shouting at donkey
disturbing donkeyWww@QuestionHome@Com
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in open kids playing shouting at donkey disturbing donkeyWww@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: So the kids are playing and shouting at the donkey, while the donkey is shouting!. The kids are disturbing the donkey while it is shouting!. Excellent, very poetic, I absolutely love donkey poems!.Www@QuestionHome@Com donkeys are beautifull creatures!. in their world they call those children trolls!.!. and they laugh!. otteri's style is getting on the surface!.!.lately!. some day!.!. me going to try it!.ty!.Www@QuestionHome@Com there is only one thing about donkeys i have found interesting,,, your poem does not address it!.!.!. ;-(Www@QuestionHome@Com The form and gist of your poem is similar to a Japanese HaikuWww@QuestionHome@Com nothing worse than a disturbed donkey!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Umm I think you should put more thought into this!. It's not bad but add more to it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Donkeys aren't worth poetry!.Www@QuestionHome@Com "A donkey!, a donkey! My kingdom for a donkey!.!." your poem doesn't grab or inspire me!.Www@QuestionHome@Com assanineWww@QuestionHome@Com maaaaaaaaaaahvalousWww@QuestionHome@Com donkey shouting!? I like it, I will look at my donkey in a different light!Www@QuestionHome@Com I have found fears I thought did not exist!.Www@QuestionHome@Com who the hell are you otteri's twin brotherWww@QuestionHome@Com |