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Question: How is my donkey shouting poem !?
Donkey shouting

in open

kids playing

shouting at donkey

disturbing donkeyWww@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
So the kids are playing and shouting at the donkey, while the donkey is shouting!. The kids are disturbing the donkey while it is shouting!. Excellent, very poetic, I absolutely love donkey poems!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

donkeys are
beautifull creatures!.
in their world
they call
those children
trolls!.!.
and they laugh!.

otteri's style is getting on the surface!.!.lately!.
some day!.!. me going to try it!.ty!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

there is only one thing about donkeys i have found interesting,,, your poem does not address it!.!.!. ;-(Www@QuestionHome@Com

The form and gist of your poem is similar to a Japanese HaikuWww@QuestionHome@Com

nothing worse than a disturbed donkey!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Umm I think you should put more thought into this!. It's not bad but add more to it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Donkeys aren't worth poetry!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

"A donkey!, a donkey! My kingdom for a donkey!.!."

your poem doesn't grab or inspire me!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

assanineWww@QuestionHome@Com

maaaaaaaaaaahvalousWww@QuestionHome@Com

donkey shouting!? I like it,
I will look at my donkey in a different light!Www@QuestionHome@Com

I have found fears I thought did not exist!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

who the hell are you otteri's twin brotherWww@QuestionHome@Com