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Question: Yet another!.!.!.!.!. POEM!!! Rate it, critique it whatever!.!.!. Is it any good!?
I have always liked to write!.!.!. and while parts of novels I have written are a little to long!.!.!. Poems work lovely!. So please read it and tell me what you think!?!!?




I went to that place,
where we used to talk
where we would hold hands
and go for a walk!.
I went there alone
It's our place no more
It's been that way
since you walked out the door!.



It's a work in progress!.!.!.!.
So far though!?Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
As you said, it is, indeed, a work in progress, but all together!? Pretty good!. Purely out of curiosity, how old are you!? (Of course, do not feel pressured to answer)!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

You could send that to Nashville and have a country song made out of it!. Serious!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Very soulful, I felt a since of sadness and loss of love!. If that is what you were going for you nailed it!Www@QuestionHome@Com

yeaa its a really good poem !.!. in my opinion i liked it :DWww@QuestionHome@Com