Ok, one more - an Haiku ... ?

Question: Ok, one more - an Haiku !.!.!. !?

The jaundiced sky reeks

Of renal function reduced

Piss, bloody ozone!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

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Good one! I used to be a dialysis nurse!. Memories!Www@QuestionHome@Com

it's interesting but it's a haikuWww@QuestionHome@Com

Yep, it's a Haiku: spot on!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Best Ku I've ever read!.Www@QuestionHome@Com