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Question: And what are your physical scars!?
Scars

We all walk into the room-
different lives, abodes, careers,
sizes, ethnic backgrounds,
ages too!.
Yet we carry the same scars!.
Scars that are healed
physically but never!.!.!.
mentally!.
We come!.!.!. seeking
reassurance, new resolve,
mental balms!.
For what we carry
has no cure, only delay
and we all embrace the
chance to delay, to
delay!.!.!. mortality!.
Welcome to Cardiac Rehab!Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
How about a mental joke on mortality to heal a mental scar!? Cardiac Rehab!.!.!.is there no one there, but you, who has a laugh and a smile!?
Mortality HATES to be made fun of!.!.!.so DO it!!!
Good be Afternoon!Www@QuestionHome@Com

A surprising last line, but it fits, Is it not odd, how we can connect,
our experience with so much else of the senses, guess that is called,
irony,ironic!.!.!.!.!.!.!.Other then that we all search for the same, acceptance
and understanding of who we are, and to be loved!. To bad it is all so
complicated, yet meant to be simple!. KudosWww@QuestionHome@Com

You have taken us on this journey with you from the very first write, letting us know you would be gone a while!. Through your words we have learned about your heart; the real one and the metaphysical one!.
We continue to walk with you!.

(so please! make them give you a gown with a backside!)Www@QuestionHome@Com

I've been trying to ignore the poets when reading poetry here lately!. You know, as if they came to existence all alone!. But, that last line !. !. !. I couldn't help it!.

Nice write, and I hope all is going as could be expected for you!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Life somehow appears different after a bout of mortality realization therapy!. I was never the same - quite knew that I was now on furlough!. The eyes carry the message of those who know ?Www@QuestionHome@Com

I never thought of it that way -- delaying mortality!.
Nice write!.
Those scars that need mental healing, I guess are the tough ones!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

There is a scar deep within me
That never healed!.!.!. never scabbed over!.!.
Remaining raw!.!.!. to this very day
Someday!.!.!.!. perhaps I will be strong enough to write about it
Seal it up and toss the damned thing!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Very good!. I have no scars but I sure have the pain! CLEAR!Www@QuestionHome@Com

You grabbed my HEART with this!.!.!.
yes, a chance to delay mortality!.

Good luck with rehab, friend!
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