A little poem called Small Portions?

Question: A little poem called Small Portions!?

Small Portions
By S!.F!. Reborn (Koye Lott)

Lay before me!.!.!.!. a banquet of emotions
On a table covered by roses!.!.!.!. candles flicker
Wax descends slowly in rhythm synchronized by guitar strings
!.!.!.!. Strings attached to my very soul!.!.!.!. I inhale!.!.!. exhale!.!.!.!. scream!.!.!.!.
I!.!.!.!. shudder in your warmth!.!.!.!.!. dazed and confused
!.!.!.!.!. And this was only a small portion!.!.!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

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i want the big potionWww@QuestionHome@Com

Exquisite passion, scene set, emotions unfurled, ecstasy reached!.!.!.you made it look easy with these few lines!. Well done, well done, indeed!

maWww@QuestionHome@Com

I want to hear the rest of this song!.!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

A small one seemed quite adequate to produce this piece!. A larger portion might bring out an epic!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Please, Sir, I want some more!.

You summed up a lovely evening in a few short lines!. Wonderful!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Sounds like a one pound steak to me! Watch the cholesterol! lol A passionate minimal verse delight!. A-1 anyone!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

You like the ellipses - I do too!. Nice poem!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I like your small portions!.
It gives me time to digest!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Go back for more!
This small portion you shared leads to more!.!.!.!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

This one is a contender! Great imagery, I think I could break my diet for this one!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Food can be so seductive!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I'd like seconds, please!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Good showing,,,But,,,It's like leaving in the middle of a movie,,,,,
Need to finish it ,,,,I needs more,,,PleaseWww@QuestionHome@Com