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Question: Please read my poem!.!.!.what do you think!?
I take a rather simple approach to poetry!. i try different styles!. I prefer no specific structure!.

Go lovely rose
Run into the starry night,
and deposit yourself at his doorsteps
Take with you my love that never slumbers
Captivate him with your beauty
Let him know that he holds the key to my heart
Enchant him with your fragrance
Allow your fiery hue to reveal the intensity of my feelings
Let each delicate petal caress his soft lips,
and remind him of my tender touch,
Finally do one more act of love
Cause him no pain with your thorns
For the kiss of love does not hurt and bleed
Instead permit the dew drops from your serrated leaves to heal his wounds
When these acts are accomplished
Return to me in the still night
Bringing with you his thoughts and dreams
Deflect any uncertainty that I may have
Then a s you die implant our qualities in my heart
A heart whose love is innocent
A heart whose love is longing to be acknowledgedWww@QuestionHome@Com


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I like it very much it is a nice perspective !.!.!. i did not read the first line accidentally and you gave such wonderful details i actually figured out it was a rose !.!.!. i love your aproachWww@QuestionHome@Com

oh!. this is a sweat one very good!. i like that the rose is like a messenger!. it's cute but for some reason i imagine the rose to be red!. it's very easy to understand and easy to imagine!. i like it!. another great one!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I think your poem is beautifully written and has a gentle tempo that suits the contents perfectly!. Well done and thanks for sharing it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

O!. My!. GAWD!.
I love it, I could tell what you were feeling as you wrote it and it's simply wonderful!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Sweet rose go to him tonight
I send you with my love's delight
But wait, I will go with thee, tonight
If you get there first, tell him to see
I am with you and please do not leaveWww@QuestionHome@Com

That was beautiful! It's the best poem I've read in awhile! great writing too!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

That was awesome! Some of the best poetry I have read in a while!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

WOW that was really good :)Www@QuestionHome@Com