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Question: What do you think of this,does it mean anything to you!.!?
As days subside and light expires
tis not the time to weep
For though its beauty has declined
This land must surely sleep
Within the serpents lair are born
The lessons of the wise
And you should dwell upon them well
Before the sun does riseWww@QuestionHome@Com


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It may denote a loss of impetus,such as when the land sleeps during the winter,until the warming and revitalizing rays of the sun begin to turn the frosts to water,bestowing renewed strength to all things!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

wow!. thats totally awesome!
if you wrote this its amazing!.

but to me it means!.
alot of people feel worthless or scared when the dark come!.!.!. and its saying theres nothing different about the dark, because everything must rest!.
and the dark is like a "serpants lair" and you need to face it and learn "the lessons of the wise"

thats what it means to me!.
its epic!. :)Www@QuestionHome@Com

It means to me!.!.!.

that my best education comes from those who are as serpents!.
I should not cry in the darkness but dwell on the lessons gleaned within its presence!.

I enjoyed reading it very much!. I feel it rather than understand it or perhaps my difficulty lies in defining it with words!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

The serpent hibernates in the winter, waiting for spring when it can enjoy a great bounty, so too, people must be patient and let a spring come into their lives when they can enjoy a great harvest, take advantage of opportunitiesWww@QuestionHome@Com

first four lines have a peaceful feel, but the last four are in complete contrast to that tone - more of a threat or a warning - which makes it feel slightly uncomfortable
but other than that (if they were maybe separate) i like it!Www@QuestionHome@Com

you have something with in the grasps of your palms
it means look and listen to some of the things people say
it may be usefull and i dont get line 5!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

Wisdom cannot be contained in a poem
Or a book
It only graces you
When you take the time
To let it!.!.!.!.


Nice!.


serpent's needs an apostrophe, by the wayWww@QuestionHome@Com