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Question: Poem!.!. so far away from me!.!.!.!. "whatcha thaink!?"!?
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They came together from two different planes
Their first impressions, possibly their last
They dropped their pretenses, threw off the chains
Inhibitions absent, the die was cast

Impetuous and wild, laid claim to this night
Start to remember; feelings from their past
Passions, hungering; that neither could fight
Strangers in a strange place in world so vast

Woke him in the morn, giving him no chance
Had her way with him, still, he said “goodbye”
Turned and walked away, “did I see him glance!?”
Look back and blow a kiss, she liked this guy…!.!.


The conversation still goes on, they dance
Thoughts turbid, haunt; reality defy
Together grandly, built their circumstance
Hearts intertwined with love until they die!.

They came together from two different planes
Impetuous and wild, laid claim to this night
Woke him in the morn, giving him no chance
The conversation still goes on, they dance


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was listening to this!.!.http://www!.youtube!.com/watch!?v=fcnP5CjOy!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Have your holy peace within your inner monastery - the best of all! Your center shall be more lively than that dead world between planes
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!.!.!.demons and angels
dwell in parallel planes
to look in each other's eyes
is as forbidden
as to smile
though!.!.!.

!.!.!.some transcend from the usual sun!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Excellent excellence!. You find muse in everything I see!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Beguiled by circumstance and a backward glance!. Nice!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Now this one has a smooth transition of ideas (and even some punctuation)!.

And I easily heard a voice!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Nice inspiration and great writing! Keep it up! I love these!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Well there you have it,,, Look back and blew a kiss That done did it didn't it!?!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

is that how u get your ideas for your poems!.!.!.lol!.!.!.just remember the miles between us is nothing cuz im here for yaWww@QuestionHome@Com

Does this describe a one-night stand!? Yes, it does!.
Had some of those, one of them becoming a 15-year marriage!.
Good memories; bad memories, all Intermingled!.
But memories all are something we cherish!.

Trysts, and fights, deception and more!.
Moments of anguish and moments of passion!.
Together, then apart, then together again!.
Then apart forever, our divorce now in fashion!.

A few years of freedom, friendship and more!.
Life in the fast lane, but never could it last!.
Then meeting another, falling in love now again!.
Living in the future, but we never forget the past!.

They could never put my first marriage on youtube!. It would melt the ethernet!.Www@QuestionHome@Com