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Question: Does this sound more like a song or poem!?
you live like life is unending,
there seems to be no time to play,
the happiness, you’re pretending,
you’re wasting the moments away!.

you say your work is never done,
and that you don’t have time today,
you don’t even think about fun,
you’re wasting the moments away!.

a week, a month, a year has passed,
your thoughts seem to wander astray,
seems like life is passing too fast,
you’re wasting the moments away!.

clock is ticking, time is flying,
all the blue skies will turn to grey,
before you know, you’ll be dying,
you’re wasting the moments away!.

desperate to catch up with lost chance,
and with words you forgot to say,
it’s too late, you live in a trance,
you’re wasting the moments away!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Songs are poems!. They're both "lyrical!." So I can't really say it looks like either or the other!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I believe that a good poem very often makes a good song!.

This is an example of that!.

Write music to it, and then you will have both!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

It's a Song, I'll buy it and I'll give it 5Www@QuestionHome@Com

Like a song but is toooo long ,
u can make it hear like a poemWww@QuestionHome@Com

it sounds like a songWww@QuestionHome@Com

Songs are poems!. This is reminds me of a song I've heard before!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com