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Question: Holiday poem !? Please critique!?
To all the poets on Y/A
I see your work here everyday
I read about your loves lost
And everything you want most

I read your lines of joy and mirth
And how you love this planet Earth
I've read about a lovers kiss
And about the loves that miss

It brings me joy to read your words
The greatest poets I've ever heard
Though with some I don't agree
Every one is dear to me

So now I write on this day
My own words just to say
A wish to each and everyone
A joyous day of Christmas fun

Merry Christmas To AllWww@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Thank you - nice to hear a happy greeting to ALL!. Internal strife is tearing this site apart!. May joyous blessing abound!. Merry Christmas - back to you - and God bless the peacemaker ?Www@QuestionHome@Com

Nice one!.

Critiques can wait
'til after the holiday!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Back at ya!.
Yep!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Very nice Kenneth, and thanks!. Have a merry one!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

the was the bomb i wish i could have wrote thatWww@QuestionHome@Com

Pretty cool!.!.!.!. I like it !!!!Www@QuestionHome@Com