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Question: Which title sounds/suits my poem best!?
"Sorrow's Song" or "Last Lullaby"


In the forest deep, a song is heard,
A mother and her baby bird

They sang a ballad of joy and love,
Of beauteous birds flying high above!.

The tune would delight any ear
And surely conjure many tears

Then came a noise, so cruel and loud,
Swiftly followed by a large dust cloud

Surely it was a dreadful wrong,
To drown out such a pretty song

The noise came from a creature of steel,
Forest was his daily meal

The monster tore down every tree,
Every branch and every leave

The little bird began to shake,
And so the mother bird did say,

“Hide, my sweet, beneath my wing,
I will find another song to sing”

As the tree began to shake,
The mother thought to abandon her sake

But her baby bird, he could not fly,
And she refused to say goodbye

Instead she whistled a sorrowful tune,
And wished the horror to be over soon

The mighty tree fell to the ground,
Oh what a noise, oh what a sound

With it fell the birds, still singing their song,
The monster had committed a terrible wrong

The mother wept, oh how she cried,
As silently, her baby died

Still the trees around did fall,
The monster did not care at all

No longer is the sweet sound heard,
A mother and her baby birdWww@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Last LullabyWww@QuestionHome@Com

wooooow!i love your poem so much!.i know i shouldn't rate it but i will give i 100 out of 10!!its so sad:(

and i think last lullaby suits best!

you should publish this poem!i like it a lot!

congratulations!Www@QuestionHome@Com

tree hugger blues, last lullabyWww@QuestionHome@Com

last lullaby so works for itWww@QuestionHome@Com

word choice at the last shift of the poem killed it!.!.!.in a bad way!.

I would call it it: Hallelujah's Lament # 3Www@QuestionHome@Com