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Question: Does anything ever catch your eye while driving!?
Like a Rock

A light turns red

Spring’s silent heat
gently wanders, drifting, mingling
with the sonorous sounds of Seger!.

Our eyes meet!.
Our faces beam!.
He nods his head to the beat!.

The light turns green!.

A mere reflection in the mirror
I leave him
sitting in the grass on the median
his tussled yellow hair glowing under the sun!.

Like a god
illuminated beneath the heavens
Like a statue
revered by the static throng
Like a rock
valued for its strength!.

A moment,
losing form
as I wonder!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Ooooh! I liked this! Turn around, quick! Go back and get him!

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You are a romantic at heart!.!.!.!.!.
Wear your heart on your sleeve!.
Looking for love at first sight!.
Destined to fall hard in a relationship!.

Great little poem, real, full of a simple easy feeling!.!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Sometimes we're too preoccupied to seize the moment and then it's gone forever!. Your poem reminds me of why I have to slow down and smell the flowers if they ever come out again!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

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!.!.!.her excitement is contagious!Www@QuestionHome@Com

You've sort of
written my
life story!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Blond!?

Damn it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Animals!. I'm always afraid they will get run over!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

What's your problem!? You don't know how to park!? lol A fun poem filled with the question!. Well done!.Www@QuestionHome@Com