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Question: Comments on a poem about missing what's right in front of you!?
he laid something beautiful
at my feet
and I missed it
the beauty,
vulnerability
it held!.!.!.!.
went on my blind way
'till a
gentle reminder to
go back
take another look!.!.!.!.
this time I saw
it was crystal clear
if one had the eyes
and the heart to see
in shame I go to him
with humbled words of
"forgive me"Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Poetry is a magical puff of smoke
in a hurricane!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Yeah, that is an excellent poem to raise awareness! To be conscious at all times what is in front of us, and shall we not notice it enough, someday it will go missing and it will be too late a lot of the time!

That even goes for someone who is willing to be our friend or our romantic partner!Www@QuestionHome@Com

I know all to well the feeling
beautifully spelled
for broken hearts to see
spin thread from the words
and knit their wounds!.

Your words are healing,
for their truth,
and yes,
their vulnerability!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Sometimes we can't see the forest for the trees!. We can't see what's right there because we're looking too hard!.!.!.but sometimes the answer will come to us!.!.!.and hopefully we do see it (even if not immediately)!.

http://uk!.youtube!.com/watch!?v=67J_66hdN-!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Very good ma!.!.I liked that alot!.We all take for granted the things we have But finally realize its in front of our face all along!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Just beautiful!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Beautiful, Ma!. A gentle nudge!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

lovely poem!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Ma,
I do that all the time!.!.
Lovely poem!.!.

Sometimes My mind just does not grasp !.!.!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

This is one of your best!.!.!.
and I'm not kissin' yr buttt!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

A humble prayer well spokenWww@QuestionHome@Com

Thank you!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

!.!.!.been there!.!.!.but it was too lateWww@QuestionHome@Com

i need to nail this piece!.!.!.!.!.

!.!.!.!.!.!.inside my heart!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com