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Question: A quick rewrite for goatee!.!.!.Would you like to feel sorry for me!? !?
I wrote some poetry about myself
Was not good
Read some poetry
I liked it
I met other people
Like me here
We shared our backgrounds
Wrote some more
About myself
Some people didn’t like it
Because I self-loathe
I have daydreams
I, like
Anyone needs to be loved
Time goes on
And I don’t know
I’m writing another poem
Death is an impending thing
But now I fear it
I know it will reach me
No words or thoughts
I finally exist
And now they all know
Because I said it was so
Still like a dog by death
Will I be traced
And I will conclude
On the doorstep in wonder
At all the math
I love my family
I fade awayWww@QuestionHome@Com
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Let's see!.!.!. you suggest that you are dying, that death is imminent, and yet you spend your remaining time on Earth playing at Yahoo! Answers!.
Go and enjoy the time you have left for this is surely a dark valley of torment!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
People who vocally feel sorry for themselves are usually those who deserve the least pity!. Every year you live presents new badness but also the ability to withstand it!. The people who suffer most are least likely to whine about it!.!.!.
The poem isn't very meaningful!. A sort of ridiculous announcement of interior depth!.Www@QuestionHome@Com