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By S!.F!. Reborn I stand in a pool of emotions Swirling Swirling Towards the drain in the center of my heart Swirling Living love to the fullest Tears of joy are still salty For any thing without flavor is bland So I'm Swirling In the light of the day In the dark of the night Reaching plateaus Crescendos Couplets Innuendos Swirling Not making much sense But making much love!.!.!.!.!. SwirlingWww@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: Making love and sense simultaneously is a scientific improbability!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Oh, sorry for Euwaite, but ''making LOVE'' MAKES SENSE, both at the same time, at least for those who knows to wait e duh, otherwise there is something right, you have to have for who euwait!.!.!. Excellent poem, I love it, and yes, I felt this way but just the mirage!. If you feel this way you are the most lucky human, Semper!. I'm so happy for you!Www@QuestionHome@Com Love is not to make sense of!. It is to be cherished, and fed with the eyes, souls, and spirit!.!.!.as one, both together!. You 'arrived' with poetry, months ago!. You know what you write is good when you write it!.!.!.and that's the definition of 'arrived'!.Www@QuestionHome@Com I have been in love but have never felt it in the same way as you describe, and certainly not the "swirling" !.!.!. or even the "innuendos" (huh!?)!. Still, jolly good luck to you!Www@QuestionHome@Com Your "swirl" seems to slow as the poem goes!. A double "swirling" in the last line may push this along after the poem is done!.Www@QuestionHome@Com I'm sitting in a jacuzzi of emotions here of late, and I can only hope to make sense!. (That Mr!. Euwaite fella knows stuff!.)Www@QuestionHome@Com I like this one a lot! I kept wondering though, is the swirling clockwise or counterclockwise!?Www@QuestionHome@Com Yes I have twice felt in that moodWww@QuestionHome@Com uh huh!.!. Www@QuestionHome@Com Had you written "twirling" I'd be like !.!.duh !Www@QuestionHome@Com |